Dream Deep

Thank you so much, Clau and Imp, for the crits and comments. ^_~ I will edit them in directly. I do apologise, though, for the typos and verbosity in places. ...

Gyr, my dear bird, I believe you are destined for greatness. That was... amazing . It was one of those pieces it's nearly impossible to tear your eyes from, let ...

Hah, I always need it. ^_^

Never a problem, Trident, being honest. ^_~ Sorry I didn't mention this before, but I thought of it after I logged off: “You may need to get the steering wheel ...

*dies* *slowly* *in pain* Anticipation.

*gasp* You didn't read my old signature did you? I'm glad you liked it - thanks very much, Jess. ^_^

I shall, Phorcys. Thanks so much. ^_~ I am in your debt.

I'm so glad you thought it read well, Roxanne. ^_^ Thank you very much for taking the time to read it all. As for the time period... there isn't an ...

Heh, nice, V-amp. If not a little randomly bloody. ^_~

Shriek, this was wonderful, in every sense. The pacing, the characters, the style. I loved and I would absolutely love to see more. This is a fine piece. ^_^

Well... that's because the deadline keeps changing, of course. ;) Actually, it only got switched over to the second marking period (academically). The first slip-up with the deadlines was merely ...

Ah... hi Dad. ^_~ See, this is the anticipation of the deadline building up for you. Just think of how pleased you'll get to be when I actually turn the ...

Quite good, as might have been expected. ^_~ Very nice. You're a wonderful writer, Imp. Just a few things here... The senior lieutenant, dispassionate, nonchalant, waited behind him at supper. ...

Come on, Snoink, don't swell his head... XD ;)

Much thanks, Trident! ^_^ I value your advice and I very much appreciate what you have to say. As to the aspects that you say need some work: thanks for ...